A Rightness
- Marcella Kraybill-Greggo
- Jul 10
- 2 min read
“How is it, then, comes
The chance to bloom again,
To be less master of life
And more servant to
what pushes through?”
That’s how I felt the other night
While doing YOGA on the beach.
Utterly and completely fortunate
To FEEL THIS AT HOME in my own
skin again. To seemingly have a chance
To ‘bloom again’.
As if with all the recent griefs,
I lost my bearings, lost my orientation
to what ‘felt right, good, kind and organic.’
I lost my footing.
And somehow this YOGA on the beach,
This doing moon salutations with the ocean
felt like a ‘return to the root of the root of myself’.
A sense of rightness. A sense of belonging to life again.
Returned, to a sense of goodness. For THIS I have been created.
It was almost like a ‘call and response’ with nature;
This living organically, along with nature.
A living exchange, in the moment.
“Less master and more servant to
What pushes through” -- now, more in touch with
what is already here, what is organic.
What wants to be.
Simply joining. Simply being present.
Here. Alive. GIFT.
PRESENT.
And I couldn’t help but sense also the earth’s happiness,
As we knelt on the sand, listened to the waves,
Felt the sun on our faces,
And lifted our hands to the bright blue sky.
A hum seemed to come;
A deep earth exhale.
A yes...
Accompanied by my own deep throated thank you.
~ Marcella
Today's poem prompt from Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer's poem: “Like the Peony” https://ahundredfallingveils.com/?s=The+peony
Today’s prompt:
“How is it, then, comes
The chance to bloom again,
To be less master of life
And more servant to
what pushes through?”
What might YOUR poem be...with this prompt? Feel free to share a line in response to this prompt or a whole poem!





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